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Ain't Worth A Tear
Posted On 04/17/08 @ 06:51 PM by Poetic_word
I can see the pain that lay with in your eyes
The pain of a broken heart and those famous toars of sorrow
Cover your face with the mask of confuse and depression
Feelin the betrayal of the man you love
You thought that he was different and never hurt you like
your last man did
Then, the next thing you know
He's talkin to a other girl
He holdin her, like he use to hold you
He kisses her, like he use to kiss you
He whisper those sweet words to her,
like he use to whisper to you
Now, you feel abandoned by the man that
told you "I love you."
Righ now, you thinkin to yourself
If I would of let him fuck and maybe
we would still be together
You can do that, but there is no guarantee
that he'll stay
Cause that man right there ain't worth your tears

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07/16/08 @ 09:43 PM

this is a very nice poem i enjoyed reading your workd i do have to say i love the way u focused on the expereicene of a women and u found away to understand her pain  i love the line where u mention If I would of let him fuck and maybe
we would still be together
You can do that, but there is no guarantee
that he'll stay

those wrods right there are powerful especially to the young girls my way feel that giving it up is a way to say i love you and have him stay  



04/25/08 @ 08:33 AM
 oh my gosh...u are 1 of a kind ..4 a guy to write somethin like this its just....SHOCKING...im speechless...I love this comin 4rm u...this poem makes me think that you are the type of guy that really appreciates a woman and hates 2 see her feel neglected....do all women a favor and keep speakin like this cause im in love with this poem already


04/17/08 @ 07:12 PM

PREACHING TO THE CHOIR! i enjoyed this read ive can relate and in the end did force myself to come to that same conclusion. thankyou for sharing this Peace+blessings!





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