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Forgive Me
Posted On 12/04/09 @ 03:56 PM by amehl
Forgive me for always trying
  for only being the best
Forgive me for being imperfect
  never passing your tests
Forgive me for hating your words
   for counting every beat
Forgive me for making mistakes
   for always taking the heat
Forgive me for never telling you
   for all the nights my head screamed
Forgive me for never accepting
   for all the apologies i always dreamed
 
As i leave this empty place
   to the empty world outside
At least no one knows me 
   i can finally breathe inside
 
So please, please
   forgive me for being me.


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12/06/09 @ 09:23 PM
Saweet Saweet! Mrs.Ameahl lol very nice and like they both said nice closing line but ya really like it


12/06/09 @ 04:17 PM
Yeah, like A_K_K_A said, good job closing it up. I mean the whole thing is good, but the last line really sums it all up.


12/04/09 @ 11:44 PM
good job:) i love the closing line




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