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Dignity
Posted On 12/06/09 @ 09:42 PM by BMDjackson
Dignity
We came into this world
Not knowing what to think
Having people tell us what to do
And act like are personal shrinks
Now I'm a bit older
And know some things about this place
To me it's like a miny version of hell
And there's only one escape
We dread this escape route
But know it's the only way
To feel, the feel of freedom
And be happy for a day
Some people decide 
To leave a bit early
And some wanna stay,
For those who wanna stay 
Know that when they die
They will be going to a, fiery GRAVE
Cause who wants to live
In a world of chaos and confusion
For me, there's only one solution
And that's to get out
And leave this place called home
So I'm the one leaveing early
And finding my chance of happiness
But if I don't
And i end up like the rest
At least I've got my DIGNITY
Of taking my last breath
 
Brandon Duckwitz
Wrote: 12-05-09


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12/07/09 @ 09:35 PM
i agree with amehl...emotional...great


12/07/09 @ 04:49 PM
you really rock. you just know how to put the feelings to words. amazing.


12/06/09 @ 11:02 PM
dude i really love this. you summed up a lot of the things i've felt about the world. It's very true and i haven't seen many people write about stuff like this. I want to say something other than just 'great job', but that about sums it. Great job.




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