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The Pieces
Posted On 12/24/09 @ 04:36 PM by A_K_K_A

The Pieces

This feeling spawned inside
its said that its truly blind
and the technicolor dreams
and feelings this extreme
radiate straight off of you
into me so i can feel them too
your touch is a drug, a need
emotions you cut out and let bleed
spread on the floor, around me feet
your smile makes the remains of my heart leap
drowning slowly in your eyes
cutting away all other ties
standing on the edge ready to fall
for you and give you it all
complete surrender to your desires
every feeling set on fire
so you push and i start falling
but your not there to catch me
 im still falling into the abyss
after my whole world flipped
this is my S.O.S to whomever reads this
help me pick up the pieces.





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12/24/09 @ 10:44 PM
really good dude! I really liked the last two lines. Good emotion.




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