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Hurt
Posted On 05/17/08 @ 02:12 PM by Dangela

Hurt

 

Loose are the bullets that penetrate the very core of me

Hits directly to my soul

Blood splatters escaping me

My very being limb, lifeless and cold

Crying for help you stand there a stare

No one else to hear me

I beg with a whimper

In hopes to have you run to me

But to my realization you stand there at a glare

Body stiff and eyes a glare

Feeling of nothingness overwhelming me

With realization that u have not a care.



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05/22/08 @ 01:45 AM
This piece is very deep


05/20/08 @ 06:22 PM
very vivid description, sometimes thats how it goes...we live and we learn. my mother says when people show you who they are...believe them. Peace and blessings


05/17/08 @ 08:07 PM

Oh how many of us can relate... We as humans are emotional, and can easily be hurt when it comes to a friend, family member or the one u LOVE... You laid it out as sadly some people get a joy out of playing with others emotions, etc... On the real I'm becoming a fan of your work...





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