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When I Close My Eyes...
Posted On 07/30/08 @ 02:36 PM by RealRecognizeReal20

To: My Imaginary Wife/Girlfriend & My Unborn Child

Inspired By: K-Rino - Hollar At Me, Haters, Dope Fiends & Addicts.

When I close my eyes my image of you is not clear,

When I close my eyes my image of you is not there,

When I Close my eyes my you have vanished its like you have disappered,

Now its all just a voice in my ear.

My every thought reminds me of you when I close my eyes,

When I close my eyes i'm the groom and your the bride.

When i close My Eyes my enemies colide together to try to kill me.

The down fall of me is what they see when they close their eyes.

To my haters why do you hate me? 

Did someone tell you to hate me?

If so who told you?

Do you even know why you hate me?

Ask youself these questions whenever you decide to hate me when you close your eyes.

My Son if you ever fall reach for my hand and i'll give you my soul

whenever your in danger i'm in danger

if you need help I will assist you.

Don't you know I am your mentor

If you ever need help "Hollar At Me" I am Here.

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Viewing 1 - 3 out of 3 Comments

10/23/08 @ 04:14 PM
i like your poem it deep "do you even know why you hate me"that line made me think ..


09/09/08 @ 05:45 PM
 a young man who seeks to inspire
is what I see when I close my eyes
to hear these words, YOUR WORDS
linger in my head....again, well written


08/02/08 @ 05:41 PM
i like that it's cool and dats how i feel i'm here to make an difference
if haters should hate why should they but keep it up


nice  write




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