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I Rose Through***
Posted On 08/25/08 @ 01:03 PM by aplegendary

 

 

I’m growing through the cracks in the concrete

meeting air is like another dimension for me

yet with ease, I let it ease my leaves

I’ve created a fault line in the pavement

and one day, by God’s graces

I will earthquake

I am one of those roses Pac was talking about

scratched and battered, through it all I came out

blooming improvement daily while moving mountains carefully

I lean to the left from cold winds diverting me

away from my best efforts and reactions

but my road to liberation is gaining traction

for only serenity I am asking

the most priceless

yet few are grasping

I am growing through the cracks in the concrete

Mother nature must think that I am a beast

bent on challenging her theories

when in fact I am peace

in the form of a strong stemmed entity

breaking laws where the smallest of flaws in the system lie

I am eco-destiny on the rise

When some of the others never even tried.



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09/25/08 @ 03:24 PM
Very powerful piece. Love the way the shape of the verses seem as if they are growing upward (don't know if that was intentional, but it's there, the poem could almost be read bottom up with a few tweaks here and there). The theme of growth despite resistance is a inspiring one and you've done a great job of capturing the attention of the reader. 


08/26/08 @ 06:35 PM
A VERY TRIUMPHANT  POEM. VERY INCOURAGING AND FULL OF DRAMATIC WORDS OF COURAGE AND HOPE. AMAZING HOW STRONG THE LITTLEST THING ARE..POET FRIEND, MARILYN




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