03/21/09 @ 09:32 AM

YES YES YES!  I see why you are highly recommended!  My sister this piece is all the way LIVE!
Ya heard!  On election night of our FIRST Black President I was so excited as many were.  They were
getting a drink (to toast), I grabbed pen to paper and wrote my immediate thought which was/is,

America the Great

A change has come
A historical year
Miraculous, unbelievable, unconceivable
liberating, royalty bows to slavery
America the great 2008
NOW
let God's freedom reign

( as they said), "They wouldn't give us 40 acres and a mule so we took the White House"
Ya heard!   I'm so glad i visited your profile and update myself on your awesome work.
Enjoying you as my poetic friend.

Walking in Christ as he order's my steps

12/11/08 @ 06:04 AM

This was a brilliantly truthful and well written poem, how true it is that we've created by force a nation that refuses even now to accept us equally as Americans. Yet change will come i just think to myself daily...Yes we can and then I smile, because inspite of everything against us as a people I realy believe that. Peace and blessings to you and i enjoyed this piece.

11/07/08 @ 04:22 AM

Wow i understand how much pain the black folk have gone through.  Their blood have watered the trees of liberty as they carried the burden of constructing America for the super American. Living in ghettos has been their pay and prize. I understand the tears that flow from your eye lids. I know where you come from and we all share the pain and the guilt. keep hitting the keyboard and keep pouring out that fertile mind