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SHADOW OF A PAST LOVE
Posted On 03/28/08 @ 08:15 AM by Kimanee
 

You can't shake these feelings that has a hold so strong
Just when you think its over and gone, you hear that special song
Even though you have someone who makes everything seem just right
The shadow knows and here it comes to darken up your light
No matter how much you care for the person your with, nor how much they make you laugh
There's still the thought of that special someone, that shadow in your past
While the man or woman in your life now is sweeping you off of your feet
There's always the thought and feelings of him/her that makes your body weak
As you try to shake these feelings and make yourself be content
You can't help but think of your past love and the time together you spent
And when you make love it is their face you see, their lips you touch, and their body you long to feel
Now your more confused and not knowing if these feelings your feeling are really real
That feeling of a past love has planted itself so deep
For the relationship you have, it will make it hard to keep
So make yourself humble, fall to your knees and pray to the lord above
That he may release you from that SHADOW OF A PAST LOVE!

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09/01/08 @ 01:33 AM
I love your poem, it's sweet, the rhyme and meter is fine,
but you could get more feeling with a space between your lines.
You have a lovely style and you are gifted from above,
and I confess found and married my Shadow of Past Love.
May God bless you.
Peace and Love.
     Dirtywork54


08/18/08 @ 07:30 PM
Beautifullly crafted and designed to be that balm needed for the cleansing of the soul and mind. I have a similar poem titled "Everybody has a past" but let us place it in the garbage can of history for dustbins are only opened by trash men. Some of our past are like pandora boxes that can explode and shatter lives that would have been spared the inconvinience if never opened. Life is a continuum and love the greatest gift given humanity by God. Today we have misconstued sex and love and love has become an object for pleasure. let us give it its sacredness and the value it deserves. It hurts when i read on Journals about the poor relationship and sexual abuse by black brothers on black sisters. I believe that if you wanna help somebody that help should not be tied to having her pussy gang f****d. It humiliates us a race and as people.




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