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POSTED BY: Poetic_Raiyne on 03/21/08 @ 06:21 PM


6 colors all multiplied to create

something so beautiful

beyond all standard comparison

one that stands against all odds

and flies gracefully in a gentle breeze

Colors that combine to make another

standard color

All of these colors represent a side of me

Blue & Purple represent my calm side when

I am writing, creating, or composing my

various pieces

green represents my nonending prosperity

as my poems reach beyond the pages of

my poem notebook to the masses of people

that choose to hear da message

yellow & orange represents da sunshine which

shines brightly when a poem reaches it's destination

and the response is like a bright star shining in

the darkness

Red represents da venting that I must do every 

once in a while to get my point across about

da shytt I endured in my life time

All these colors are defined as me a

RAINBOW BUTTERFLY

I fly with much grace as high as a eagle

spreading my colors abroad

every where I go

Poetic Raiyne is not just a household name

on the pages of my journals

She is a name that shall be known, read

and heard of nationally

as she flies on to her destined place

Beyond where she has ever been

RAINBOW BUTTERFLY!!!!!!!

Take your flight

and aim high to

your destiny....... 

 

 





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POSTED BY: PoeticSpace on 03/21/08 @ 09:15 PM


6 beautiful colors make up the queen who is known as Poetic_Raiyne... Each one reflecting a part of u, as today thy rainbow can be seen by all... Know longer shielding from greatness as right now thy stage is yours... Do shine so brightly while thy society embraces the whole u... In summary I shall now take the time to look deeper when it comes to green, red, blue and so on... Thy Colors being more then what the eyes can see,etc...




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POSTED BY: ashmoore53 on 03/24/08 @ 02:56 AM


This piece shows you are a multi-faceted individual. One who is comfortable in your skin. Each color representing a different side if you.
We are all rainbows with varying degrees of color.




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POSTED BY: ebonyqueenFreeman on 03/25/08 @ 11:32 AM


This piece is excellent, it makes all of us think about the many colors in the world, also if people understood and loved colors there would be no type of prejudice for everyone would love all the colors. Great write, keep em coming!!




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POSTED BY: JoyGregory on 03/28/08 @ 09:00 AM


u have a way with words..i think that this is a delicate piece and it spoke 2 me....but u r more than just ya outside beauty.....
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POSTED BY: JoyGregory on 03/28/08 @ 09:00 AM


u have a way with words..i think that this is a delicate piece and it spoke 2 me....but u r more than just ya outside beauty.....
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POSTED BY: alicia4nice on 03/29/08 @ 07:24 PM


i liked how u described u,i felt this was well written, and painted a good pic, of who u are as person,word...
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