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"So many things inside that I can do without - desires and urges and whatnot. So extraneous. By the time I write again, I hope to be as cold as the moon that lights this page."

why are all your poems sad?? I like the flow of this piece and it seems as if you are so lonely and need a shoulder to lean on, well I am here , my friend. I like your work and I wish you could find happiness within yourself so that you will appreciate your true talents.... you are truly talented and it just so sad that you seem so lonely.

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Ebony Queen, Poetry Is my Life

Man your stuff is dark and depressing. It's written well, but I hope this is not how your life is on a day to day bases. I mean no disrespect, but that would totally suck.

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Work In Progress

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PoeticSpace - The One In Charge

i still trying to get to know u, i think u like dark things, but lets see the twist..let others see u can be versatile

Where does this anger dwell? Maybe it's not anger...Writting is cathartic.....if that's what your soul speaks when your mind in controlling your pen. Write it. I encourage a lot of poets to get down and grimey with their work. To take their mind to that dark place, and you are there! I love it!