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POSTED BY: chant1 on 04/28/08 @ 09:47 PM


T'was the night before redemption

and all through my soul

Not a demon was sleeping

The silence was cold

They taunted my mind with whispers that's old

They used the same lines on others I'm told

I walked through my house then sat in the chair

In hopes that Redemption would soon fill the air

 

As my children lay peaceful

I asked God to bless their heads

With knowlegde of His will

So their lives... they would not dread

And mama in her chair with confusion in her mind

Praying for an escape of the life that's behind

 

Before I could finish my prayer He did say

"The things that your going through... I'll deliver you this day."

The road may get rougher

And my soul will be haunted

By invisible enemies... trying to distraught it

The change will take a moment

But I'll confront the demons this day

 

Now Depression! Now Envy!

Now Jealousy and Lust!

On Hatred! On Backbitting!

On Worry and being a Slug!

From the rage in my heart!

To the bewilderment in my soul

NOW DASH AWAY!

DASH AWAY!

DASH AWAY ALL!

 

 

 

 

 

 





POSTED BY: immeasurable on 04/28/08 @ 11:55 PM


Beautiful piece!




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POSTED BY: Ebonyrose56 on 04/29/08 @ 07:57 AM


I enjoyed that
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POSTED BY: Soulexact on 05/02/08 @ 02:47 PM


this piece was nyce, loved how you did ur  rhyme scheme especially in the beginning and then u decided to switch it up




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POSTED BY: ebonyqueenFreeman on 05/04/08 @ 07:18 PM


this is poetic and it is cute, It shows you have a good imagination and a gift with words, Great piece, keep em coming!!!




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