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POSTED BY: Poetic_Agony on 04/29/08 @ 07:00 AM


 Silent death through a screaming night

 Rapidly awakening with not a soul in sight

 Wondering what was the pain you feel

Swearing to yourself that is has to be real

Because if it wasnt then what had you felt

What was all those feeling so recently delt

Feelings of sadness and feelings of pain

Wishing you could rip your heart out so it could be slain

Because it overpowers and your soul is consumed

It again halts your life not allowing it to resume

But then again it was only a dream

And the question that resides is what does it mean. 

 





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POSTED BY: Slendah on 08/23/08 @ 10:39 AM


Very interesting piece.  It perfectly describes how you feel after waking up from a dream.  I know personally that my dreams sometimes make no sense, yet seem so real.  And when I awaken, I'm confused and left wondering what did it mean.




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POSTED BY: PoeticSpace on 08/23/08 @ 12:44 PM


Hello Poetic_Agony,


All can relate as some say thy dreams per say allows one to look into thy future... Still what you painted is being experienced daily as sometimes fantasy collides with reality... What I'm saying never be afraid of the unknown, as luckily one can awaken from dreaming...




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