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POSTED BY: Justice on 05/05/08 @ 12:17 PM


No one will ever understand
why cause i'm only 16
trying to talk to an adult but they all say the samething but that someting I don't like hearing and I don't believe
why can't it be love a young man in love with a young one
Ran through the stage of a kid saw things that shouldn't been did
skiped through the stage on a teen couldn't find my self and lonely was on my ring
acted as a women but how to be a lady I had to wonder
Having breast doesn't make you a women
and beng a women doesn't make you a lady still living my life and you can't judge me you are not my god
I'm not afraid to say I'm in love because it can never be unsure
once upon a time I had to ask my self was it love or lust
but i think about him from dawn to dust How i feel about him them feelings can't be taken away but how we feel about each other that love isn't legal to stay
not at lease til I turn 18
Did you read between the line maybe the truth was blind wanting to be understood
do you see what I mean
and this is a illegal love story.




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POSTED BY: asIam on 05/06/08 @ 11:09 PM


i personally cant relate... However I will say that i liked the way you displayed your level of maturity as you understand it through life's experiences I enjoyed the read. Especially your proclaimation of love a very true statment
I'm not afraid to say I'm in love because it can never be unsure

very true statment. Peace + Blessigns





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POSTED BY: ebonyqueenFreeman on 05/08/08 @ 06:15 AM


this is your search within yourself and I like the way it flows, love is a beautiful thing and it should be shared  no matter what age you are, great flow of words and I appreciate your sharing this, good write, keep it up!!




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POSTED BY: KISSED on 05/08/08 @ 12:55 PM


"love" and "age" mathmatically never add up together. Especially when one is of legal age and the other isn't. That doesn't mean that your feelings aren't validated or that you don't feel what you feel. It's a maturity thing. I once had strong feelings for a man who was significantly older that me. It was a task. Because he had already been through what i was going through in life. When he and i met up some time later, I had then lived. Experienced. Cried. laughed. I became a grown woman. The things he was facing, i too am facing. Then i had to think....if this man knew my age(right or wrong....he didn't) why would he be interested in me? He goes to work all the while i am in first period. He complains about taxes and high gas prices; and i bitch about homework and finals. He is looking for companionship and family; and i just want to graduate. He has a car; and I just got my liscense.....When you enter into any type of interpersonal relationship with someone, there has to be more than just "feelings"......You can have all the feelings in the world, but that dosen't mean the person you feel for is right for you!!!!! Well that's just my opinion. Great poem too!
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POSTED BY: Soulexact on 05/08/08 @ 07:47 PM


Yes AGE IS BUT A #!I feel u, I'm 16. there is nothing wrong with you being in love. just make sure that you allow yourself to mature before u take that next step progress on ur own chronicle is what I always say. I love the way that u expressed urself in this piece nyce write.=)




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POSTED BY: PoeticSpace on 05/13/08 @ 09:08 PM


Good-evening Justice,


Got a brother speechless as many will say one's AGE is just another which is true per say... On the other hand I don't know if I would be down with a grown man trying to mess with an underage gal... Feel me? Some things are offlimit as you know... In all maybe this isn't lust, and TRUE LOVE... In summary your poetic family is here for ya, so always remeber that...





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