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POSTED BY: Soulexact on 05/08/08 @ 07:54 PM


(doesn't have a rhyme scheme)

 
I try 2 fight the temptation of what makes us all human, but what makes us all human is misunderstood, abstinence isn’t working, the world seems to dwell on the very addiction that makes us unwell, Some say innocence is overrated, or there is none at all, GUILTY AS CHARGED, the substance has you intoxicated, color is unperceivable to the touch, and so you can’t sense the dense of gray of your new skin tone, away, your imagination sways to Utopia, Earth has become a dumping site of extreme phobia, the liars keep throwing false images to unbalance the truthful speakers, cause and effect, this all results in instability, hatred and neglect, only really evolves around the one who dealt it, and the one who dealt felt the highly explosive karma, and as idealistic as you are, we still find an explanation to fall victim to our minds, enslaved mankind, I pray that hope won’t die, we don’t have time to grieve, barely have time to breathe, lets increase the circulation, adjust to our heart beats, let flow, let go, find a way to stimulate courage, to be the guidance that someone needs, please, STOP…….be the moral significance, portray the theme, of a dream of millions, embody the clean, and never the begrimed, the bitterness of lime has  all 5 senses intertwined, lets not surrender to persuasion, but how can you rebuke the temptation if you don’t understand it?





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POSTED BY: aplegendary on 05/08/08 @ 11:20 PM


I like this piece, it was raw! I like the line

the liars keep throwing false images to unbalance the truthful speakers

because nobody wants to hear the truth, everybody is too comfortable right now! This is the type feeling we need today in order to ensure a better tomorrow 4 the kids. I know that that sounds cliche but that's  just what it is all about.  They don't understand that the truth shines regardless. Stay up youngblood! keep writing.




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POSTED BY: PoeticSpace on 05/13/08 @ 09:02 PM


Good-evening Soulexact,


Making a brother put on thy thinking cap, but what you touched based on is reality... Guess many of us are happy with the norm, and not truly wanting to embrace world peace... There is no love thy neighbor, or uplifting thy community as a whole... So many simple minded people, yet racism, sexism, classism is reality for alot of us... Maybe u speaking on something else, but that's what I absorbed...




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