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POSTED BY: poetryonhigherlevel on 05/09/08 @ 04:05 AM


I've been thru so many disappointments when it come to men

Until i came to the point where i was on that low- key "your just a friend"

type of thing

tried of searching for those fairy tale happy endings

This is reality

so there no fairy godmothers, no prince in shining armor,no frog to kiss

because this

this place i came from

 possess men who has allowed society to rob them of their dreams

Hendering them from ever reaching their full potential

The prisons now become their homes because selling a pound or two seemed so simple

but if they thought find a job was hard before try now

when the only label you wear other than a number is a criminal

now that's foul

Now all of your talents go to waste and every year you look around only to realize your still in the same place

Constantly having people pass judgement on you

yes, i'll admit i was one of those type of people too

until i met someone who helped me realize it not as easy to get back on your feet as it said 2 be

It take time and motivation and someone to standing by your side to help you thru it
 that's when i realized there are still good men behind the many disgui-se

they choose to wear

see i swear

 i never thought i could feel like this

but just by take some time and giving a chance

i've learn that those men i've considered disappointments

were nothing more than loss souls searching for someone to hold
someone to tell them the sun will shine bright for them one day

selfishly letting go
of what could have developed into something so beautiful

And although i'm telling them we can't be nothing more than a friend

i'm only selling myself short of having a good man and

allowing society to distort my mentality

But not no more

because i've never felt like this

when i look in their eyes i see broken dreams destine to find bliss but the only way their allowed to do it is by using their fist





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POSTED BY: aplegendary on 05/09/08 @ 07:53 AM


Nice piece of work, Sista! Indeed it is not easy to maintain in today's society, may your decisions be guided by one Higher than yourself.

Yes, it's sick and Yes it's real
Reality bites, still I've got marks soon to heal.

Stay Up!




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POSTED BY: asIam on 05/09/08 @ 07:17 PM


It is sad when you think about how many men, people, who are dealing with those issues pre-labled and then grow to fit the bill. Dont lose your hope though chica! What God has for  you will be only for you. Enjoyed the read, Peace!




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POSTED BY: PoeticSpace on 05/13/08 @ 09:26 PM


Good-evening poetryonhigherlevel,


You keep it real, as this is reality for alot of young brothers... Already caught up in the game by 16, and potential becomes just a word in their eyes... Yes many want to come off as strong, yet deep down their souls are in pain... Wanting to do right, yet society keeps them down... In summary, one has to make a choice, and literally fight.... Becoming a productive citizen, hard working family man, etc...




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