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I remember when you used to pinch and suck my nipples,
Then love my needing whole.
It was when I lived inside you,
When you stepped into my soul.
My heart beat fast, my body shivered,
Then the heat made my juices flow like a river.
You came to the mountain, my volcano erupted.
Love came gushing out, then we collapsed under.
What a sexy thing you drove me to be.
I would stop at nothing to get you to pinch amd love and suck all over me.
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Believe In Miracles!
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| POSTED BY: Dlong on 05/16/08 @ 10:59 AM |
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I am sure that this person loved or perhaps still loves you with a burning passion that is truly immeasurable.  |
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Good-afternoon immeasurable,
Ok now, but on the real nothing wrong with daydreaming about a past love... Seems to me this brother was able to excite u on many levels as someone must be sensative... Love a brother to suckle upon thy peaches as that made thy temperature rise, etc... In summary, short yet sensual as all can imagine this going down...
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excellent write here , sista... this is sexy but not too erotic it is sensual, very well written.and I love the way you expressed your experience with this man,
and I hope he appreciates this piece.
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Ebony Queen, Poetry Is my Life
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ebonyqueenFreeman wrote:
excellent write here , sista... this is sexy but not too erotic it is sensual, very well written.and I love the way you expressed your experience with this man,
and I hope he appreciates this piece.
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This one turned out to be just a mirage, but at the time I was feeling what could have been. I'm glad you like it and thank you for your response too!
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Dlong wrote:
I am sure that this person loved or perhaps still loves you with a burning passion that is truly immeasurable.
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Yeah DL, I used to think that that was true. But he had all sorts of trouble proving just what he wanted and also knowing who he really wanted. It's sort of like a well with no water. A bulb with no electricity. Faith without works...............
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I wonder where he is.
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| POSTED BY: KISSED on 07/12/08 @ 05:06 PM |
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Isn't it something to remember the greatest lover's of our lives? Especially when you know the lovin is quite right. I can remember some GREAT ones too.....hummm if only i could ride those rides one more time....lol....great piece!!!
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KISSED wrote:
Isn't it something to remember the greatest lover's of our lives? Especially when you know the lovin is quite right. I can remember some GREAT ones too.....hummm if only i could ride those rides one more time....lol....great piece!!!
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Smiles and rememberances of those times. There's a certain fondness that plays over and over in my mind and I do have to lol. It was good back then. Thanks for the feed back and I'm happy that you understand where I was coming from.
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