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POSTED BY: KISSED on 05/17/08 @ 03:03 AM


I have allowed my heart to out think my mind

Forgetting we are now in a different space and time.

You are no longer you, but just a memory

With the same old lines.

Are you just a fabricated thought?

From a time when I thought I knew a lot

Why would life place you back in mine?

Maybe I didn't learn the lesson the first time it was taught.

Passive, Aggressive...introverted or outspoken

No matter what I am, I can't win for losin

I can't be everything to everyone

But right now it's you I'm chosin!

Why can't you see, as if through my eyes your seeing?

We get to do it again, but with better feeling

Maybe it's me with the reminisced emotion

You opened up to me, and now you question our dealing?

Is it you or simply me?

That is having issues dealing with this state of reality

You are to her, already what she wants

Maybe friends are what we really need to be.

You know just like I

That calling us "friends," would simply be a lie

Friends don't feel and do what we have

The only way for it all to end, is so my friend say goodbye.

I am not willing to lay it all on the table

To fold, as though this game I'm not able

To head toward the bigger picture

As "more than friends," I want to be our label.

Take this how it is

There are no underlying clues or messages

My words are here sitting in plain sight,

For you and the world to read, in good ol' black & white!




POSTED BY: immeasurable on 05/19/08 @ 04:48 PM


You deserve 3 snapz up for this picture of some of our truths.

I like these lines:

I have allowed my heart to out think my mind

Why would life place you back in mine

Maybe I didn't learn the lesson the first time it was taught

 

No matter what I am, i can't win for losin

 

I can't be everything to everyone

 

There are no underlying clues or messages

 

ETC!!!!





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POSTED BY: asIam on 05/20/08 @ 01:45 PM


I totally agree with immesurable! The first line! yes indeed grabbed me had me needing to know what it was that you had to say and u did say it in "good ol black and white" Love the strength you exhibit in this piece and the message clearly displayed, enjoyed it! Peace and blessings to ya!




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loving you is like a song i replay every 3 mins and 30secs of everyday~L.Hill
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