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POSTED BY: immeasurable on 06/30/08 @ 01:40 AM


He stood by my gate

waiting for love to shine through

Forgetting the spark that he once used to use

It was in the beginning that he tried to be true

but, there always was another who could get next to you

I wanted to let him in, but he had dirt on his feet

Every time he came near he would try to compete

Never realizing that I don’t look at my life as a game to be played

Not knowing that this is me that he needs to be true

Walking alone I have learned to fear nothing only my God who makes me strong every day

I have not died of a broken heart, let this be known-- it’s only made me smart

Don’t go down for the  okey doke rise and be strong life is not a joke

Sweet victory comes to those who can wait 

Don’t go running out of the first open gate

Check yourself first, be true to the game of life 

Don’t play the field of hate...

Walk into my gate with flowers and roses

Open to receive all the love that I offer--there’s no hoaxes

Just don’t fill my heart with negativity cause when it rains I want to get wet

Remember what you did to catch my groove, make me sweat, make me move for only you

My gate don’t swing open for jokers and lies, only open for the one who wants this prize

This prize is the one who was true all the time. 





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Believe In Miracles!




POSTED BY: asIam on 06/30/08 @ 09:50 PM


i like the honesty in this, u started off flowing in a schem then it reads like emotion took over and u caught it again in the end, i always like to read ur work :) the message is real, and thought provoking, its been a min, seams things have changed.




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loving you is like a song i replay every 3 mins and 30secs of everyday~L.Hill
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POSTED BY: immeasurable on 07/01/08 @ 12:59 AM


Changed?  Not really just tired of the same ole thing feel me?




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POSTED BY: asIam on 07/12/08 @ 11:37 PM


I understand





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loving you is like a song i replay every 3 mins and 30secs of everyday~L.Hill
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POSTED BY: ShayShay2 on 07/24/08 @ 09:50 AM


Thank you, I needed this dose today, Hello! Wakeup people!!! I did. Know or get in touch with ur self worth. Study urself. Thas what I felt when reading this.





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POSTED BY: immeasurable on 07/27/08 @ 03:54 AM


Reality is sumthin' ain't it?





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12/03/2008



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