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| POSTED BY: Nanami on 08/17/08 @ 06:04 PM |
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You taste smooth like rain
falling across my skin
I want to drink you whole
I want to soak you in
I hate you with every ounce
that I can possibly muster
How I allow you to toy with me
You're so charming, deadly
I see all the answers
of the universe
Pouring from all around
when you are so near
I am nothing in your eyes
I exist when you need me
You leave me barren
Wondering why I even care
I find you hiding in my mind
Between good-bye and hello
Smelling of spices and soap
Filling my mouth with silence
You break my spirit
It's so out of control
I wish you'd see me
As I clearly see you
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If some guy tried to rape me and I didn't say he could, I'd be pissed!
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Wow! I like this one. It is lethal, they should be dropped like a bad habit!
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Believe In Miracles!
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Good-evening Nanami,
It's sad how others will prey on one's emotion... He only acknowledges you when he wants something... It could be your body, money or attention per say... What I'm saying it's never nice to try to live through another soul literally, as SELF-LOVE must come first...
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PoeticSpace - The One In Charge
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I just love the duality of this poem. How the feeling expressed are both of hate and love, sharing the pain and pleasure we all experience when we are in love. Those feelings of emptiness when we are apart and the stabbing knowledge that you just might love this person more than they love you.
Beautiful poem. It's honest and knife cutting deep.
I find you hiding in my mind
Between good-bye and hello
Smelling of spices and soap
Filling my mouth with silence
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| POSTED BY: Nanami on 09/18/08 @ 02:54 PM |
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Thank you all so much... Everytime I read this, it just reminds me of all the things that are right in front of me that I can't have. Kinda makes me sadface from time to time.
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If some guy tried to rape me and I didn't say he could, I'd be pissed!
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| POSTED BY: Dangela on 09/19/08 @ 07:22 PM |
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To know and love what is there but not able to have.....Very deep...sad but revealing.
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love is a risk...absolutely...to love and not be loved back, very sad...but sometimes true....I like the flow and imagery...good piece keep writing
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“A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life, to be thankful for a good one” - Marjorie K. Rawlings
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