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POSTED BY: kudjo on 09/18/08 @ 04:18 PM



I call to your remembrance

David the keeper of sheep

whose ways were with-held from men

and revealed to lamb and sheep

and to lions and bears

until he was by Goliath provoked

to keeper of Israel

David had no regard for the boasting of Goliath
I defy the armies of Israel this day
Nor was he by his appearance affrighted
and he had an helmet of brass upon his head

David was not charitable to the taunts of the Philistine
Choose ye a man for you and let him come down to me
Nor was he impressed by his stature
whose height was six cubits and a span

David cast aside the pedigree of Goliath

a champion, the Philistine of Gath

nor was he moved by the imaginations of his vanity

I will give thy flesh unto the fowls of the air

 

David prevented the outrage of Goliath from his eyes

and the staff of his spear was like a weaver's beam

and was not distressed by his lawless utterances

Give me a man that we may fight together

 

David did not admit to his ears the noise broadcast by Goliath
Why are ye come to set your battle in array
nor was he panicked by his bellicosity
I will give thy flesh to the beasts of the field

David was angered by the insolence of Goliath
Am I not a Philistine and ye servants of Saul

and was dismayed by the multitude of vain words

If he be able to fight with me, and kill me, then will we be your servants

 

Goliath appeared mightier than the noise of many waters
yet with an insignificant stone did David encourage his soul to flee his place of arrogance

David did not judge after the sight of his eyes
and he did not approve that which he heard with his ears

Therefore look abroad ye fainthearted
and show me where is the remnant of the reputation of Goliath
naught remains; it is the house of David which abides

Remember David the son of Jesse
in me he sleeps a shepherd
to awaken in you a King
Golaith roams to and fro in the earth
his manner loud; his boasting vacant
the day of his decline fast approaches
it is in the hand of he
who bears five smooth stones
 

 

 





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Poet Kudjo-Poh




POSTED BY: asIam on 09/19/08 @ 07:14 AM


 your words are refreshing and Holy Spirit Inspired. As I read the title excitement boiled, and you met the needs thereof. the way you "call to rememberance" a the story that most have in some shape heard but only  heard carnally and never understood, is (i know ive said this before) a gift. Contiue doing the will of the Father who sent you. Peace.

Remember David the son of Jesse
in me he sleeps a shepherd
to awaken in you a King

Golaith roams to and fro in the earth
his manner loud; his boasting vacant
the day of his decline fast approaches
it is in the hand of he
who bears five smooth stones

Poetry at its best!




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loving you is like a song i replay every 3 mins and 30secs of everyday~L.Hill
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POSTED BY: Miss_Lady on 11/02/08 @ 02:52 PM


WoW--thats was truly amazing! The way you transformed the story of David and Goliath was beautiful!  The story was transformed in a manner in which a reading can see in depth how the mighty, powerful and boastful Goliath was killed by the calm and peaceful David!!!......I too also love the way you ended it! Great work!!
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