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POSTED BY: aplegendary on 10/06/08 @ 08:15 AM


Don’t think it’s because you’re Black that I support you

Even though that fact is a factor, I have to warn you

After this election, accountable you become

to not only US, but to this whole nation you run

Remember Watergate? The history of those tapes?

Make no mistake, they don’t want you to be great, so they might make

Rogue moves, you’re in a chess game with fools

you be the king, matter of fact, just be you

Picture Bobby and Malcolm, John and Martin

paving your path to surpassing odds and margins

Really, do people really know that content of character

plays the greatest deciding factor when people back ya

Even though you had a fiery pastor

composure you held, certainly you quelled the madness

Speaking on Race in in Amerika in front of Amerika

the one act nobody attempted since Martin was telling us

In dreams reality breathes a cool breeze

under fire you were never ignited, forcing your critics to breathe

Deeply, in anticipation of defeat, in my mind I see the ironing of white sheets

Even with the progress we’ve made, you’re still a shade too dark

but look who the jokes on, the Thomas Jefferson’s at heart

Now the crossroad is here, the choice is clear

we haven’t had a President in 8 years

The only thing we had was warfare, failing schools, and a frail economy, among others just follow through on your policies brother.





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POSTED BY: Poetressforever on 10/06/08 @ 01:28 PM


Very original structure. Great job. Great read.
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POSTED BY: Poetic_Inspiration77 on 10/07/08 @ 06:21 PM


I agree...unique structure, and for this it works...good flow as well..nice piece

 

keep writing





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POSTED BY: PoeticSpace on 10/08/08 @ 03:15 PM


hello aplegendary,



you spoke the truth, as if barack obama is elected the wolves shall come out... what i'm saying he now will be attacked in everyway... bad enough some don't want a black man to lead this country, and many will jump at the chance to blame him for whats ailing this country... in summary, still this nation is ready for something new...



Note: I see you spelled out Dear Mr President





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POSTED BY: immeasurable on 10/08/08 @ 05:47 PM


Good read for Barack.  Quite an eye opener.




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