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POSTED BY: Ndim on 10/11/08 @ 04:19 PM




 

I have always been in the dark struggling
To know why most women will go only
For accomplished men who have cars in
Garages all ready for a comfortable ride


Letting go those who could have been their gold
Blindly only seeing the filth and never the shine
Beneath that filth that could be patiently polished
Obtaining a shine that glows like the rays of the sun


Women go for vanity leaving behind the substance
Most have chosen husbands because of their swollen
Pockets hoping to be benefactors when they pass on
Life ceases to have meaning when those we love and


Cherish only come looking after material gain
Can we once more redefine our relationships?
We are like unpolished gem that comes out diamond
When finely shined and polished to glow


The filthiness of yesterday buried with a new shine
Every ugly past pushed to the background and forgotten
Men and women should go learn from mother nature
Accepting to do polishing so as to obtain what we desire


Ndim Bernard Ngouche
Poet and writer
7th of October 2008


 





POSTED BY: Poetressforever on 10/13/08 @ 01:16 PM


Great title.

Nothing in life comes easy, so there is certainly nothing wrong with working for a relationship.

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POSTED BY: Poetic_Inspiration77 on 10/14/08 @ 07:18 PM


I like this one...and I agree that lots of women and MEN are choosing mates for the WRONG reasons......instead of love, trust, and honesty!!!

 

keep writing





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POSTED BY: immeasurable on 10/15/08 @ 03:00 PM


Amen to that!




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