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POSTED BY: Poetressforever on 01/02/10 @ 12:57 PM

Poetic Curse

Be my poetry
Written in verse

The intricacies of who you are
Line by line
I will explore

And the words are you
And you are the words
Crammed on a page
Illustrated
Dissected
Immortalized…..

Will I do you justice?
I mean taking your human dimensions,
and scaling them into this 8 1/2 by 11 frame
Is there room enough to let you fly?
Let you laugh?
Let you breath?

Maybe I shouldn’t……….write you in verse
Make you my poetry
For I’ll shackle you to the page
piece
by
piece
Until there’s no more you left to be
Instead of leaving you as you are now…………free

POSTED BY: gpoet on 01/05/10 @ 09:38 PM

i like the way you wrote this. I like the way you talked about putting them into words, when you meant writing about them. nice flow.

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How fast does a zebra have to run before it looks grey?

POSTED BY: MsPoeticg_2 on 01/28/10 @ 09:07 PM

Free verse....I love it!!

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Keep faith alive!

POSTED BY: Poetressforever on 02/08/10 @ 11:05 AM

I've written quite a bit of poetry and just reciently relazied that once written words cannot be unwritten.....so all of those that I've written about I haven't really done tham justice because all of who they are cannot be encompassed into any poem no matte the length.

POSTED BY: asIam on 02/11/10 @ 04:43 PM

Snap Crackle Pop! I too love this! Do your thing lady u do it well and justice is most deff served! Peace and blessings!

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But how can people call on him if they have not believed in him? How can they believe in him if they have not heard his message? How can they hear if no one tells [the Good News]?

POSTED BY: Poetressforever on 02/18/10 @ 03:17 PM

Thanks for the props!!!!!!!!!!!

05/22/2012

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