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POSTED BY: poetryonhigherlevel on 01/05/10 @ 12:26 PM


Complications fill the air
There is something that lingers in the space between us
Resistance...  a secret...
What could it be?
When your love is distant to me
Your touch is cold
And words arent as warming as they usually are
Your eyes whisper honesty but
It is not clear
your mouth dreads to share what your heart wants me to hear
is there someone else?
maybe our passion is gone
Unanswered questions and a vivid mind
A deadly combination to keep me blind
Trapped in a fanasty so far from the truth
Living in picture perfect life on the outside 
but the walls are crumbling and there is issues with the roof 
And yet I am stuck 
for reasons that are meaningless to you 
But it's complicated 
so we leave it at that
A commitment was made so we cant go back.


 






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POSTED BY: gpoet on 01/06/10 @ 09:17 PM


I like this. I can see all the confusion and sadness in what was once a great relationship. Well worded.




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POSTED BY: Poetressforever on 01/11/10 @ 03:36 PM


Nicely written

"your mouth dreads to share what your heart wants me to hear"

sweet!!!
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POSTED BY: asIam on 01/11/10 @ 05:22 PM


Snap Snap! Do your thing! Commitment...and secrets, truth, the outcome, the fear of the unknown and the ease of complacency (sp) has captured many in its web of content. PEace and Blessings




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POSTED BY: PoeticSpace on 01/12/10 @ 07:07 PM



hello poetryonhigherlevel,


sad reality for many, as it happens that way... thy mate not willing to the the truth yet their actions lets one know the relationship is over... what i'm saying one can't for another soul to stay committed, so why dwell on it... L-O-V-E seems to be just words these days...





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POSTED BY: MsPoeticg_2 on 01/28/10 @ 09:04 PM


If there is a leak somewhere, it will surely find it's way in, sometimes in ways so unexpecting that it's  just too late....nice write poetryonhigherlevel!




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