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POSTED BY: MsPoeticg_2 on 01/28/10 @ 08:38 PM



I heard outcries that I could not physically console. I closed my eyes and prayed with a vengeance

I swam across many oceans in my mind to  try and reach those in need


I returned  with my heart cracked  and dripping with sorrow from the the heavy load  I carried with me

I saw mothers dying while standing, not from the quake that shook the ground causing devastation,  but just from the thought of having lost their love ones
 

I saw fathers searching for families with whom  they've  just shared  memorable moments,  they will  only see them now in their minds and feeling them in their hearts

I saw real people doubting the almighty
wondering why

How do you pick up the pieces literally  and  move on?


I am still feeling the devastation that rocked  Lousiana; now this.

Although I can't physically be there to assist, I continue to rush the ocean in my mind to give financially from the heart-- and that's real

Haiti needs your help and prayers now!

  

 

 





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POSTED BY: gpoet on 01/28/10 @ 09:49 PM


This is good. You bring out the emotion well and it's very descriptive. It's easy to tell that this is something you care about.




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POSTED BY: PoeticSpace on 01/28/10 @ 10:28 PM



Hello MsPoeticg_2,


I do agree as for years this island has been overlooked... Sad it took a quake for us to recognize whats been going on... Can't imagine losing hundreds of thousands of thy fellow brothers/sisters, as now left are millions who have to rebuild... A big task but glad to see the whole world do their part with aid, and helping out thy victims... Especially the kids... In summary I will keep all in thy prayers...





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POSTED BY: Poetressforever on 02/08/10 @ 10:37 AM


Although I can't physically be there to assist, I continue to rush the ocean in my mind to give financially from the heart

Ditto darling!! I love your humanity!
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POSTED BY: asIam on 02/11/10 @ 04:32 PM


Beautiful and on time, so very honest and love filled that one can help but appreciate this work. Prayer changes things, i am a witness! Awesome write lady, Peace and Blessings.




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POSTED BY: poetryonhigherlevel on 02/14/10 @ 09:14 PM


You painted a realistic picture of the tragedy in Haiti. It is so hard to see people go through things like this especially when we cant predict the outcome.Even when there is  nothing but silence to fill our ears, there will be cries filling theirs .

peace





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