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Posted On: 03/04/08 @ 09:20 AM
How do I start? Where do I go from here? Tell me how to determine the life i want to live...

We all have questions but who's to provide the answers,today's youth is the truth in such a clueless manner

teach me right from wrong cause after all i'm still learning, you tellin me that there's a turning point but yet i'm not turning

Where are your mistakes cause you actin' like you have none...show me your championship belts for life's challenges that you've won

No negativity cause i'm not here for that..it's answers that i want so here's the questions that i ask

give them to me str8 cause i'm not gon' cry or beg..you say that i'm taking the wrong path but where's the path that you led?

Can't seem to get an answer speak up dont be scared after all you are the grownup or atleast thats what you said

it seems that you stuck..you speechless whats the matter? you only feel the after effects after the after

you seem to be confused i'm askin you some questions tell me what i need to know and dont pass it off as nothin

just a poor black girl alone and afraid lookin for answers from all over tha place...... 

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09/29/08 @ 02:23 PM
I really like this poem..It's my favorite..Check out mine when you get a chance.  You have alot of great talent.


04/17/08 @ 10:58 AM
Thanks for all the comments sista.. I like this piece here. I think its always one particular aspect of the youth (Crime, violence, drugs) that people focus on and that highly overshadows the youth who are excelling and making positive paths for themselves. Your questions are needed in a time where everybody thinks they have all the answers. Create your own path and leave a trail. Write On!!! 


04/10/08 @ 01:52 PM

You're so right! I am 24 and I hear it too. Most of the time, an older person feels like they can give you words of wisdom, even if they have never been through what you're going through. But what I have learned is the best thing to do is always listen to everyone. Take as much advice as you can and you will know when to apply some of the advice you have received. But its your life to live so do it the best way you can, to hell with what everyone else thinks. Ya Dig!



03/26/08 @ 12:33 PM

So many of our youth are in need of guidance... Some mentor/person who shall direct them in the right direction as we live in a hectic society... Still know that at such a young age all what u go through if part of LIFE LESSONS, so take it day by day... In summary, thy flow is deep...



03/08/08 @ 07:15 PM

I love pieces that i can relate to and it one of them. At time we feel so confuse and we can look to someone for the answers and they might run off at the mouth about what to do, but what good is advice from someone who have never been through something. I been through alot but not everything so it is best to given a little on what you been thur and get a little from what others been thru.
You are a very strong writer.




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