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Posted On: 04/28/08 @ 09:22 PM

 

Iwanted to see how far I could push this pen
 let it write the stories  of our children
 and the struggles that be
castle in the sky  dreams 
rooms messy where
floors beset with nightmares and hidden shames
and they playing dress up
putting on  the pressures of their peers that’s way too big for them
but they never paid attention to the what it was they wanted to be
Like
 they looked in mirrors that never been cleaned
 so to say
they never got to see the opportunities in themselves
could have been anything
if their mindset was set  to lead
but led is what became of them as their fragile little life proceeded
they took flights on their imagination with inhales of weed smoke
and along with the smoke their esteem floated
away
and like Dumbo seen pink elephants when drunk  so did the teens that drunk
and they was to drunk to even breath
passed out  waking up not knowing the surrounds they was in
  and thinking  it was cute to skip to my Lou from school yard blues
because you see  they didn’t give a damn about the being educated   
 thought what am I going to need that for 
and that was that voice on the left that was telling them that
told them Life was like a trip to Disney world
Picture fantasyland and its bliss
 a kingdom full of magic with an island of treasure
And they pictured their land of tomorrow buzz light years away
Thinking they going to have it easy because Disney dreams so easily come true
 like riding on the float in a parade
but it’s a small world that consist of sex money and fame
And so their too many Adventures lead to the good dying  young
and that’s  is how the story goes



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04/29/08 @ 09:44 PM
castle in the sky  dreams 
rooms messy where
floors beset with nightmares and hidden shames
and they playing dress up
putting on  the pressures of their peers that’s way too big for them
love those lines in a nut shell this is the message, love fairy tale view of a happily never after story, guess thats the way the story goes.



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